No safe harbour
5 Sentences
- The Omanis ferry was leaning slowly
- that frighten crew was trembling intensely
- the frighting ship sinking loudly
- a frighting sea crashing against the ship
- the mysterious ship swaying
Friday, 27 September 2019
No Safe Harbour - 5 Sentences
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I like that you have five lines but they have no capitals in the four lines
ReplyDeletegood sentences.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the word INTENSELY
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